Day 16: Peer Editing Section 1

Monday, 2/5/2018

Objective: 

I can understand the thought process and organization behind a peer's thesis paper and first section.

Agenda:

1)  Download the Checkpoint 11: Final Paper assignment from Google Classroom.
2)  Copy your rough draft into the document and then fill out a few things you know you still want to work on in the box.
3)  Find a peer editing partner who knows NOTHING about your topic.
4)  Take the Pasternak Peer Editing Pledge.

I PROMISE not to take the comments of my peer editor personally.  I know she or he is only trying to help me make my paper better.  I PROMISE to peer edit carefully and try my hardest to help the author make the best, clearest paper possible.  

5)  Peer Editing -- We are going to be working both on the sheet I give you AND on Google Docs.
Here is the Sheet for Section 1.

Homework:

• Make sure that all of your examples are excellent for tonight.  Look at every context / example.  
• I will check to see  that you have made edits tomorrow,

• Thesis is DUE Friday